I was challenged by 'miss x' to write a story, she wanted to see into my mind at the fantasies it contained. The challenge was for my writing to make her so horny and wet she had to act on it. I only had one condition, and that was that if I did, and it worked, she had to let me know how it had connected and what she did, blow by blow. She loved it, and I enjoyed the images in my mind from her reply! So here it is, a little snippet into the dirty mind of Mistborn.....Enjoy! ps, please feedback or partake in her part of the agreement and mail me the details at [email protected] (please no spam etc, just genuine feedback and such)
Happy New Year
so, i'm sat here, new years day, thinking about what could be happening, if you decided to surprise me, its driving me to distraction, my c*** is throbbing, pushing against my jeans as the blood pumps into it, I subconsciously stroke the length with my fingertips, the material rubbing, adding to the feeling, when there's a knock on the door, I get up, slightly flushed from the thrill of someone being so close, right outside the door, whilst im inside doing what i'm doing, the adrenaline charges through me as I step towards the push button to let the unexpected visitor in.
I open the door to find you standing there, slightly sheepish, with a look of mild apprehension on your face,
'Hi' I say, 'this is a bit of a coincidence, i was just thinking about you, in that way we do from time to time' a grin passes over my lips, and you can see the hunger in my eyes, my smile widens, as I see you glance down my body and see your eyes settle on my groin, so briefly, then double taking and going back for a longer look.
'need I ask what I was doing in your head?' you say with a wickedly knowing smile,
'well, why dont you come in and i'll tell you, if you like?' I say as I open the door wider to let you pass, you step inside, our eyes locked as our bodies brush together in passing.
I let the door start to swing to, and for a moment, I stay stood in front of it with my back to you waiting for the click as it locks into place, then turn to face you, you’ve removed your jacket and seeing the firm swell of your breasts, even though they are still hidden within your clothing makes me even harder, the fleeting look on your face signalling you saw and liked the effect, a slight flush the only indication that thoughts are racing through your mind, and your body is awakening to them........
I step forward, and I can see your breathing increase, my heart pounding trying to explode from my chest, I reach out towards you, and take your face into my hands, then forcefully but gently pull your face to mine and move in to kiss you, you lean into it, both of us unable to resist the force of the passion, desperately fighting for release, we break apart gasping, before lurching back towards each other, our lips and bodies crash together, wanting, needing to feel the press of each other, along the full length of our bodies.
My hands grasp the bottom of your vest top and pull upwards, our mouths still entwined as the cloth rises up to your shoulder, tongues flicking against each other exploring deeply, you fumble at the buttons on my shirt, frustratingly slowly it seems, they come apart one by one, a low growl seems to emanate from your lips, seconds before my body is jerked as you rip my shirt apart sending the offending buttons all across the room, our kiss is broken by your top hitting our chins, we part and tear off our respective tops, eyes hungrily taking in the semi- naked form before us.
I move forwards and at the last moment I dip slightly, arms tightly fastened around your ass as I start to lift you as easily as I would a child, you let out a small cry of surprise and with a swift hop your airborne, briefly, before slamming into my mid-riff wrapping your legs around me and pulling inwards with your thighs, our pubic bones smash together and we both shudder into each others mouths, with the feeling.
I carry you forward, 3 steps, 4, 5, and then lower you down, resting your beautifully rounded arse onto a desk top, before breaking away to concentrate my focus onto the fastening of your jeans, giggling together at the clumsiness of my fingers, until at last, the button snaps open and I can lower the zip, I waste no time, swiftly grasping the back or them with one hand, and yanking sharply downwards as I lift your lower body with my other hand then slide them all the way off your legs, you jump slightly at the touch of the cold desktop, whilst simultaneously revelling in the sensation as goose bumps explode across your flesh, you reach out, and grab my throbbing cock through my jeans and I groan at the mind blowing sensation that causes within me, I pull my hips back, so close but so frustratingly out of reach, and continue to remove the last material barrier between me and your swollen, hungry pussy, I start to kneel as your knickers slide past your knees, your legs instinctively open as they finally pass over your toes and away to the floor,
I throw my head forward, aiming deep within your thighs, my eyes locked on, targeting the one thing in the universe that I need at that precise moment, as the gap closes, I catch your musky scent, and inhale deeply, groaning out loudly with desire as I exhale, savouring every atom of aroma.
My tongue flicks out, and touches the very bottom of your entrance, your juices making my taste buds come to life, slowly, oh so slowly, I move my tongue upwards, probing ever so slightly into the opening as I go, drawing closer and closer to your swollen bud,
‘ Oh God yes! Eat me!’ you cry as I start to gently suck on your clit, I pause briefly, before gently nipping it between my teeth, just firm enough to make you draw a breath sharply,
‘Like you ever had a choice’ I say with a grin,
then i’m back down, tongue tracing large circles around the whole of you, sucking and caressing every inch of your now sodden pussy with my firm tongue, involuntary noises slipping from my lips as I drink your juice, thirstily, as if it was giving life to a dying man.
My hands move upwards, gently stroking your bare stomach, before slipping one hand around your back and deftly unhitching your bra, in the briefest of seconds. Your breasts spill out, suddenly free of restraint as with my other hand I jerk your bra off your arms and across the floor, all the time my tongue continues, relentlessly building the sensation between your legs, layer upon layer of pleasure building towards the heavily anticipated climax that must surely come soon, my hands on the move again, cupping each breast in the palm of my hand, feeling the weight of them resting there, luxuriating in the soft yet firm feeling of your flesh, I adjust the position slightly and take a nipple between thumb and finger, both at the same time, and gently but firmly start to roll the swollen puckered flesh, feeling it harden further. You moan even louder, the sensation throwing you faster towards the finish, your body reacts instantly, and I feel the spasm of pleasure hit my lips, as your pussy contracts, you’re close, I can sense it, so close, and so very, very, wet.
I’m in heaven
I stop suddenly, changing it up, wanting to keep you hovering on the edge as long as possible, you whimper, with slight disappointment at the sensation starting to fade
‘hold that thought’ I say stepping away, crossing to my drawers to get something from my bag, I turn back around and pause grinning broadly at the sight of you sitting naked on the desk, watching me, casually stroking yourself keeping the orgasm within reach
‘There’s a good girl’
I start to walk back towards you, hands behind my back, pushing something into my back pocket, you crane to see what it is ‘a-a-ahh’ I say shaking my head,
‘Later’
I take up place, standing sideways on between your legs and kiss you firmly, my right hand dropping to my side, ‘here, let me’ I whisper, moving your hand away and replacing it with mine, I start to stroke, slowly up and down, occasionally slipping my finger between your lips fleetingly, the change in sensation, causing your opening to twitch happily, round and round your entrance my finger circles, the pace slowly increases, the friction sending pulses of joy deep inside you, faster and faster, applying a little more pressure each time, your lips start to open in anticipation, your body responding eagerly, my finger slipping deeper and deeper into you with each pass, occasionally bumping against the back wall of your pussy, I change direction one more time and now i’m just pushing my fingers in and out of you, your own juices lubricating their passage, the silken wet feeling making my breath come quickly, you moan as my fingers thrust faster and deeper inside of you, you feel so turned on you cant stop yourself, the longing driving your hips forward and you begin grinding yourself urgently against my hand, wanting, no, needing me deeper, needing me to fill you.
Its not enough to satisfy your desire, you want more, you start to say something, your voice breaking with the panting of your breath,
‘Your fingers feel amazing but ..’
I seem to anticipate what you’re about to say, and before you get chance to finish the sentence your voice cuts off as you shudder involuntarily and a loud moan escapes your lips.
At that precise moment my thumb presses down against your swollen, throbbing clit, my thrusting fingers slowing but staying in constant touch, pressing against your velvety walls, moving rhythmically backwards and forwards, as my thumb continues to circle your protruding bud at the same agonisingly slow pace, varyingly gentle then firm.
You begin to feel the tingling of an oncoming orgasm, making you grind harder against my hand, the world seems to fade around you, every fibre of your bodyis filled only with the desire for release,
‘I’m going to cum!’
‘Oh fuck!.... Ah!’
‘I’m cumming!’
Just as you’re about to give yourself over to the orgasm, you feel my teeth graze your nipple, and everything explodes around you, your body bucks violently as your pussy contracts around my fingers. Your head thrown back as you silently scream at the sky, you cum, hard, so fucking hard.
Breathless you collapse backwards, lying full length on the table, droplets of sweat glistening as they roll gently down between your breasts.
I stand transfixed, watching your body shudder as a wave of aftershock passes through you, your cum juice trickling slowly from your swollen pussy lips.
You hear a noise, a rustle then thump and raise your head, looking down your body, you grin at the realisation that I’m now completely naked, my hand gripping my cock, moving up and down the thick swollen shaft,
‘That was the most amazingly, fucking sexy thing, I have ever seen’ I say with a wicked grin,
‘I’m sorry’, I say, indicating down towards my furiously wanking hand,
‘It’s just, God! I couldn’t help myself, you’ve made me so fucking hard and horny, and seeing you lying there naked, your pussy still twitching with pleasure? I needed to do something about it’
You laugh, ‘That’s ok’
You start to sit up, and I instinctively stop, feeling sheepish at what you’re seeing me do,
‘No, don’t stop, I like it! Knowing that you’re doing that because of me is such a turn on’
You look at me, our eyes lock together as I take hold of my rock hard cock once more, you look down my body, leaning forward slightly and watch as my hand starts to build its rhythm again, the tip of your tongue, parts your dry lips moistening them, you dip a finger inside yourself, and raise it to your mouth, you lick it suggestively and I don’t think I can take anymore.
I open my eyes, and your still watching, but now your crouching on the floor, masturbating so vigorously now that I’m caught unawares, my orgasm hits me from nowhere, my body shoots into spasm, the muscles in my legs and arse tense, I groan, and then I’m Cumming, so blissfully Cumming, the release inside me is insane.
A warm jet of cum shoots out of me arching briefly through the gap between us before splashing onto your chest and stomach, sliding slowly down towards your pubes, my head is thrown back at the sight of this as then another shoots out of me with the after wave of pleasure and splashes onto the floor, my cock, bouncing with each beat of my pulse, a little bit more cum escaping to drip from my fingers with each twitch,
‘That, was hot’ you say, you hand starting to gather momentum,
I glance down and instantly I’m hard again, you lean forward slightly and take the tip of me into your mouth, your tongue circling the hot, swollen head, I luxuriate in the sensation for a few moments before withdrawing myself and bending to gather my discarded jeans, turning them in my hands until I locate the pocket I am searching for.
Your eyebrows raise, eyes wide in realisation that now in my hand there appears to be a blindfold of some kind and some lengths of material,
‘Don’t stand up, that’s exactly, how I want you’
I step around you, gently taking your arms and moving them around your back, tying them together at the wrist, just tight enough that you can feel it, and know that there is no escape from the restraint unless I want there to be, you let out a whimper and your body shudders in anticipation, you sense a movement behind you and the world suddenly goes dark.
Still behind you, I wrap my arm around your waist and taking your head in my other hand I gently but firmly bend you forwards until your head touches the floor, you feel vulnerable yet you know you are perfectly safe, and allow yourself to sink into the mild sexual fear, completely trusting in me and the forthcoming pleasure, as you feel a silky ribbon slither around your ankles, securing them in place, you’re helpless to resist.
I stand and take a moment to look at the beautiful sight in front of me, drinking in every detail, you, on your knees, head resting down on the floor, ankles bound lightly together, your ass and pussy pointing up towards the ceiling, hot, swollen lips, all moist and inviting . . . how can I resist?
You feel me drop to my knees behind me, then nothing...... stillness......silence surrounds you, you can hear your heart racing but that’s all, minutes pass, oh so slowly, it feels like hours from where you are.
‘Hello?......are you still there?’
Suddenly you jump as a sensation shoots through you like a pleasurable thunderbolt, hot-wiring your clit to your brain, again and again as my finger slides up and down your lips, then once more, nothing...... stillness......
Moments later, I trace my finger down your spine, your back dipping in tandem to its path, before simultaneously, just as my hand comes to rest on your ass, you feel your lips being forced wide apart and cry out in shock as I push myself slowly into you inch by agonisingly slow inch, your lips spasming around the girth of me, feeling every little bump and ridge of my shaft, until finally I come to rest, my balls tapping gently against your now swollen, aching, clit as all 8 inches of my rock hard cock seem to fill you up, pushing urgently against the very back of your horny, wet pussy.
‘Oh my god’ I groan, ‘that feels so fuckin good’
‘Ya -ha’ you manage as your lips quiver against my shaft
I grab your hips, then start to pull out, slowly all the way back to the very tip, before thrusting forward so quick and hard, pulling your hips back towards me at the same time, our bodies crash together, my arse muscles tightly balled as the tip of me contacts at the back of you at the very end of the stroke, it hurts, but it’s a hurt you know you’re going to like, one that will leave you feeling a little tender in a good way in the morning, and you groan knowing that this, this, is what you’ve needed for so long, I pull back a little faster this time before slamming into you again, the sensation of your lips and juices driving me wild, the speed picks up and each time my tip hits deep into you, you cry out a little harder as the pleasure builds, faster and faster, hard and deep, our bodies fitting together like we were born to fuck, the thrusts getting more and more frantic as the end comes into sight . . . . . . .
